Sha-ne's Reviews

[Halo Wars - Desktop]

yah this sucks

out of the kindness of my heart i gives you an 6 for your first animation, but PLEASE if you ever make another flash, make it a shitload better than this one.

[VG Master Vol.5 Ep.1]

OH MY GOD XD

I can't stop laughing, im sorry but its rly funny if you just press the right arrow key rly rly fast and listen :D

[Micwizard]

Its Kick-ass!

personally i hate stick figure fights
but this flash just totally KICKS ASS, its got truly original effects and fight sequences...

you really deserve that spot as the all-time top scoring, 'till some noob gives blams you cuz hes jealous >:(

[Rorke's Drift Invaders]

It's no masterpiece, but everything works exceptionally. Graphics look presentable, but it lacks originality. Overall, there's nothing to get excited over.

[The Room Tribute]

Love this game!

It's not just a (very good) tribute, its a fun game to play as well.
oh, and for the impatient ppl... press 's' to skip dialogue ;)

[Alice is Dead - Ep 3]

Crayon Time!

The tapes were hilarious :D

[Theory of Everything Remake]

I like the back and forth between the wobble and the screaming synth. The wobble sounds a bit overpowering, however, and while the high-end scream is noticeable, it sounds thin. I also wish i could hear the kick drum more...

Domyeah responds:

I noticed the wobble bass kinda overpowered the scream... I'll try to fix that and update the song or something. I'll work on the drums too.

[Star-Drifter]

This style of music isn't my favorite, but even I can recognize a good mix. I think this composition is fun and creative, and since it's mixed nicely, I can confidently say that you did a good job with this track. Oh, and I especially like the background delay sounds you used in the breakdown.

[B & EN - Dischord]

I like the beginning arpeggio, it establishes a nice atmosphere for the track. I think you overdosed on the sidechain, though; you gotta ease up on the compression so I can hear how nice your basses are!

EnNinja responds:

Sidechain is love, sidechain is life

[Road to Darkness]

well hey I like it

sure those trees don't look natural, but that's it- they are the first things that caught my attention, and the eerie shape is complimented by the monochrome color scheme.
I was put off a bit by the lack of features on the landscape behind the trees, but I feel you made a good choice of keeping it that way; otherwise it would be too busy of a background, and it would rob the attention away from the center.

Intentionally or not, this piece has a really appealing format based off the "path" you had drawn. Simply put, the path leads viewers' eyes straight to the mountain, to the tiny cave like opening you added. Plus, the trees frame the path, they fence it- they too add to the effecting of drawing attention to the focal point.

Of the mountains in the background, there is room to add better texture- especially with charcoal. Additionally, they seem to blend together rather than stand apart.

well like I said, I like it

LucidShadowDreamer responds:

I'm glad you like it!

Yeah, I never intended for this piece to look realistic, which is probably quite obvious. I simply like the theme. You might be right in that more features in the landscape would draw attention away from the center. The truth though, is that I found no other way to use that white crayon than on and off, basically. It's either full powered white, or none at all (it was harder than a stone, I promise!) There are probably many other people who know how to use them well :)

I'd like to claim that the center based format with the path is intentional, the question is only how well I succeeded. If I remeber correctly, the basic shapes of the trees where the first things I drew (after the 6 basic lines that I used for proportion). Lastly came the mountains :)

I agree with what you said about the mountains too. There is much room for improvement in several aspects when it comes to the entire piece :D

Thanks a ton for the review!!!

[Grimmjow Fan Art]

another review.

I miss the color! It's just an okay sketch to me.

I give you credit for trying, but it looks pretty clear you had a hard time here. Did you use pen? That's VERY difficult. Anyway,

The right arm is too thick, the shoulders are too wide, the eyes are unfocused, the chest isn't balance, and don't even SPEAK of his nipples. >_> Almost perfect!

GZento responds:

Yes, I was lacking a lot of refinement in this picture, I also drew it with a Tachikawa G-Pen, so you are correct on that, it was very difficult

[Cheeks]

I'm reviewing you.

I always enjoy color. But I wish there was more detail here...

you could have drawn the fingers more elaborately, but I guess it looks okay. The left face looks amazing, especially with the expression: beautiful. the right face is... different. there's a stray mark on the nose, one eye seems of center, and the ear is- well, you can figure the rest out. I smell talent... =w=

GZento responds:

Yah Yah! I thank you very kindly! but I guess the work I did on my face isn't as great because I wanted to make Rochelle stand out more, and I'll try to work more elaborately! this is much appreciated though!